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Hi Roderic, I liked the line "Only a woman knows/the meaning of her kiss." That was cool. And I think it's naturally "Fool's Gold" for the title as others said. The "feelin' old" line reminds me of that other famous song... "and I'm gettin' old...." I'd like to see more concrete imagery here - visual details, what color was her hair, why was it fake but felt real? Thanks for sharing, hope my comments are useful in a small way  Linda
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