Ahhhhh Brian listen to MAB for a few on the State of Country today smile LOL


Robert -- this is a nicely written lyric with a lot of great visuals and new, concrete images.

As a musician (though not country, sorry) the main thing I see here for going to music with it is that the verse and chorus lines are the same length. It will be harder work to create lift and variety in the melody to establish the shift between verse and chorus.

That said - it's still a nice write and I wish you well with it!

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Linda