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by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/31/26 09:46 AM
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Hi Roger and Janice, What a sweet song. I think it’s a nice story and written well as always. If you wanted it to be commercial I think it could be. What I try to do when I write in this style (with long lines) is work in some internal lines. I think that could make this flow ever better (not that it doesn’t flow now). It’s just an idea; you know I always enjoy your lyrics/songs!!  Take care, Dottie
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