Hi Joice!!...how you bean?

anyway...about the "boat deck" line,I make an effort not to be married to rhyme. If the line wants to go in an "implied" direction,with a SLIGHT phonetic match...I let it.

There is a danger zone with rhyming,where the lyric takes a different tack and feel when forced to rhyme.

The suggestion would "work"...but to me.."work" is less than natural.

I am happy to have so much support for the babies I favor also.

Thank you.

just wait 'till I get my gear sorted out.... wink