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by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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Very nice, pretty song! Great feel and lovely voice. Lots of nice lines and images... On the overall song side it works naturally as it's well put together. Great musical bridge change.. The thing that stands out a little is the third lines melody. Also that the chorus feels more like a pre-chorus. Since the first two lines move along slow and absorb the slight change could come more on that third line.. Giving it a pre-chorus vibe. Songs dont all need a pre-chorus, but if absent they need an extremely effective chorus to hop to. This chorus does not have that. Still great work, and Tammy you find very nice cool things to go to melodically. Don't be afraid to reach out and try some other things, stretch a little more and more this way or that way. This line struggles the most "There's never been a love like you for me"
One big tip, or help would be start thinking "Rhythm" more in your melody and singing. You have the "flowing" aspect down real well..All the best guys Good work! Mike PS- Oh yes I know how much easier it is to say than do  I hardly can or do anymore... Tammy you just listened to my song "Taking On Forever" It's actually a perfect example of what I'm talking about. My verse music is the same throughout no pre-chorus change... I start out with a soft spacious flowing melody on the 1st lines then the entire rhythm of my words change on the last lines of the verse. Completely change.. I picked that up from countless countless songs, but from nobody more or more effectively than Stevie Wonder. Play around!
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