Evening Shirl.

First of all I want to say welcome to JPF. Do not think I have had the pleasure.

Second of all I do not know if you are familiar with the tv show, "How I Met Your Mother" but one of the running themes is the characters trying to find each others Doppleganer and I believe that I found one in you and a co-worker/friend of mine. The picture you posted as your avatar looks very much like her.

Anyhow to your lyric.

I have no "nits" from Canada. The flow is easy enough to grab onto and "sing", the story is simple and universal enough to understand and you have put your character in a positive light.

All good points in my opinion.

Thanks for sharing.

Douglas

"Is this a practice? They are all practices." John Denver

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