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Grandpa’s Violin
©2003 Tolkein

1.
The creak of a floorboard
A scent on the wind
Voices echoed in my mind,
Searching for something I’ll never find.
I miss you, I miss you.

Chorus:
I’m crying to the strains of Grandpa’s violin,
Notes of a forgotten song held within
Weathered face reflected in the moon
Crying to the strains of Grandpa’s violin.
I miss you, I miss you.)

2.
Hands were so gentle
So hard yet so kind
The summers whispered soon,
A tune (maybe melody instead) hummed, slightly out of tune.
I miss you, I miss you.

Chorus:
I’m crying to the strains of Grandpa’s violin,
Notes of a forgotten song held within
Weathered face reflected in the moon
Crying to the strains of Grandpa’s violin.
I miss you, I miss you.

Bridge:

The heat of the day
Relief in the shadows
Eyes so brightly blue
I’ll always remember you.
(Maybe omit these) I miss you, I miss you.

Chorus:
I’m crying to the strains of Grandpa’s violin,
Notes of a forgotten song held within
Weathered face reflected in the moon
Crying to the strains of Grandpa’s violin.
I miss you, I miss you.

Don't forget to put Title of song © Year and your name.

JeanB



[This message has been edited by JeanB (edited 03-24-2003).]