Hi Calvin,

This is really good writing! Wow talk about out of the box! I love, love, love this;

He loves the indian rhythm
That the buffalo nickles make This is great writing!!!

I love what you did at the end and when I heard it I thought maybe the chorus should be;

CHORUS...
Down the Psychiatric Hallway
The pathway to his mind
Down the Psychiatric Hallway
I wonder what they'll find This line just makes it so profound! smile

This is my favorite of your songs. smile

Dottie