Great song production. I like your vocal tone quite well. I like when you said "you got it, beer," that broke the pattern a bit. You might consider breaking that pattern again after the "longneck, a can, a frosty mug," line to say "beer" differently there than you have said it in the two previous ways that are getting predictable. Like maybe in a question--Beer? Then at the the song's end, abandon the established pause and go right into "Let's have another beer," holding that note a little longer. By breaking the pattern just those two times, it would help keep the humor of those lines from getting "old hat."

I absolutely love the song Richard, you have the main ingredients well established with this song. Good luck with it. Maybe you shoud pitch this one to the large brewery companies--you got me thirsty! steady-eddie.