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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/07/26 11:11 PM
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by Rob B. - 10/04/26 02:16 PM
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Brandon, that comment could mean any number of things. The first - and simplest - that springs to mind is that the lyric is wordy and needs to be tightened up so that the story/impact is stronger. If you'd post a lyric or two in the Lyrics forum (Forum 3 gets the most traffic), it would be easier for folks to determine what the (perceived) flaws might be. Regarding "so simple of a fix": a good bridge is arguably the most difficult section of a lyric to write.  It can make or break a lyric. As well as in the chorus itself, a song's payoff is/can also be in the bridge. I could well imagine an artist passing on a song because the bridge is weak. Donna
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