Hi Chas

I like this, it works pretty well and as with all good songs, it comes with a large dose of truth smile It would be worth exploring her thoughts a little more (maybe in a bridge) where she knows she should know better yet she can’t stop herself.

I love the line in the second verse. Don't need no movie 'cause I'm the show. I'm your late night dinner and I'm ready to go.

Nice one

Nige