Lovin' Your Copncept here, B-Bro!

Think some lines are improveable..here come da Sugs:

V1:
"You're STAINED glass..."
"I'M a black hole in the Universe WHILE you'RE my light brigade"
"I'M a SHOT of hard liquor, Baby, you're pink lemonade"

CH:
"LEMON's cold-&-bitter/
GOES so much better in a glass"

V2:
"I'm up WAY-PAST midnight; you're asleep by 9"
"& YOU'RE ALL-Missionary WHILE I like it from-behind"
"You BUILT a wall of silence inside my house of pain"

V3:
"On Sunday you're in church, while I CALL FOR GOD in bed"
"We have SEPARATE CommunionS, Your wafer'S on my tongue/
THORNY CROWNS UPON EACH HEAD, & GROWIN' Orchids in the Sun"

(KOS) one & or All, Amigo! Sure can Identify with lots that's bein' said here! Good Luck with a Good'n', Amigo!

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan