Hey Stan,
You know me, Mr. Condensing! Tweaks below, keep or sweep smile


I've Made Mistakes My Whole Life Long
(I know you need [color:#FF0000]long
to rhyme with strong, but the thought would be "strong-er" without it--"I've made mistakes my whole life")[/color]

But This One Love Should Sure Run Strong

I'm Just a Man & Nothing-More
But I'll Work Harder, That's For-Sure (I'm not a fan of tag-on lines..)



I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase. - Harlan Howard

Co-writing = Compromise!