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by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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vs
We've been going out for a year or so
You still think we're moving too fast
Say there's still so much that I don't know
About the things you did in the past
vs
I said it's OK I can Live with all that
Maybe it's time for us to move on
You say you cant let go of the life you once had
It'd be like giving up your favourite song
Chorus:
So you said NO
We're not living together NO
I wont love you forever NO
Things aren't going fine
And there's no way you'll change my mind
vs
We're still going out as if nothings changed
Every thing I do is still wrong
But I cant forget the look on your face
When I said we should move things along
vs
So now I'm thinking that It's over with us
How could love so sweet taste so bitter
Our relationship has bitten the dust
You begged me to reconsider
Chorus:
And I said NO
I wont reconsider No
I wont love you forever No
Things wont work out just fine
This whole thing's been a waste of my time
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I don't think I've even seen a song called "No" before. The woman here sure knows how to put a guy down.
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Good story Joe,I like the hook too which is a good un
Best of luck with it
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Absolutely agree with Travis, great hook, and good story line. Nicely Written! Summer 
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Hey Jim
Thanks for the reply. Now that you mention it the title is different. Yeah she sure sounds like a mean one but she gets her comeuppance in the end.
Cheers
Joe
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Hey Travis
Thanks. I like the story because it's pretty simple. Glad you liked it
Cheers
Joe
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Hey Summer
Thanks for your kind comments.
Peace
Joe
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I like it...kinda started humming a tune in my head as I read along.
73's & 88's Good Buddy!
Chris Bohlman
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Hey Chris
Thanks for your reply. glad you liked it, it does seems to resonate with a few people.
Peace
Joe
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