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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Jun 2013
Posts: 58
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"Unreturned"
Verse 1
You smile while you tell me goodbye
You turn around and walk away
It's good you did not see me cry
Now that I've got more pain to pay
Refrain
My one way love leaves me concerned
My one way love ends unreturned
Verse 2
Falling in love was all in vain
I've lost so much along the way
I'll go crazy, maybe insane
My one way love all fades away
Refrain
As many times as I've been burned
My one way love ends unreturned
Verse 3
The honest truth is hard to take
My whole life is a lover's choice
My one way love is hard to break
Lovers leave and I have no choice
Refrain
You'd think by now I would have learned
My one way love ends unreturned
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Joined: Jun 2011
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Nothing survives as the final ashes burn
only sorrow, lost pride of love unreturned
Hi Blue
Just an idea for v3
best of luck with it
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hi Travis,
Thanks for reading these lyrics. I like your line. It's something I would not have written. I have another set of lyrics that has the line, "It's hot coals to ash when lovers separate".
I don't know if the lines are too much alike or not.
Thanks for your input.
Blue
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Not many things harder than a one way love. I've found that artistic people, songwriters in particular, are susceptible to this.
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Jim,
Thanks for responding to my lyrics.
I've never seen a girl that pretty named Jim.
I like her picture.
Blue
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