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néomí
by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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Since I cannot play any instrument properly I am bound to keep things simple. But 'simple' needs not be bad, does it. Yet I am biased, of course, I like everything I do because I like doing it (that's actually two different things here, but you'll get the drift)... http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13185862I saw your reflection in a window the sight bore itself into my mind I wonder what can I do so you become someone of a more tangible kind to chat me up or turn me down give me hope or let me drown turn me on or mess around chat me up or turn me down the mem'ry stirs me up at daytime while my wet dreams stir me up at night I feel that I have to find you so you can help me put things right and chat me up or turn me down give me hope or let me drown turn me on or mess around chat me up or turn me down chat me up, turn me down give me hope, let me drown turn me on, mess around chat me up, turn me down
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A good rock song Bernd, very 1970s in it's style but that's fine by me
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hey Bernd,
The song itself is well structured, simple as you say, snd the songwriting is fine.
Just a bit of good and hard work on the presentation, and you'll have a listenable tune.
cheers, niteshift
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