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Sycamore Tree
She seemed a little fickle
Couldn't decide on the pig lip or the pickle
So i said,hey,why not get both,they're only each just a nickle
No need to dicker
Aint but a dime don't be a nitpicker
I said,hey,you buy both of them,and i'll get the liquor
And we'll sit in the shade of the sycamore tree
Enjoy our little evenin' without a care to be
Watch the hustle and bustle,of the world go by
There in the evenin' bliss
She hit me nice with a vinegar kiss
I said,hey,you're really a trip,i want more of this
She said hold on to your pegleg
It's all in the plan aint no need to beg
I said,hey,you light the fire on my powder keg
And we sit neath the shade of the sycamore tree
Enjoy our little evenin' without a care to be
Watch the hustle and bustle,of the world go by
Watch the hustle and bustle,of the world go by
Last edited by Michael LeBlanc; 10/16/15 07:41 PM.
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Hey Mike, that was fun to read.
Vic
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thank ya Vic,it was fun to write to.Mike
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You have some interesting rhymes here, Mike. Not sure what a pig lip is.
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thanx Jim!Pickled pig lips come in a jar like pickled sausage,eggs and such.Good stuff!Mike
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This has great rhythm to it and those rhymes and unique details bring the story to life! I like the carefree attitude and the message in the chorus is a goodie!
Kristi
A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist
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thanx for the stop by and comment Kristi!Mike
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Some interesting lines and one or two things I've never heard of before which you explained in your response to Jim's comments.
Something a bit different which is always good
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hey Michael,
Cool beans! That was a fun read .. very well crafted!
Lisa
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thank ya for stopping by Travis!Mike
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great one mike! really a trip,i want more of this
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hey Maxi,thank ya bro!Mike
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