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i decided to do this while my ribs marinade. http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13384205I Can't Cry Anymore i can't cry anymore though i feel i must both my eyes have turned to rust i can't cry anymore the tears won't come though i try its all been done i can't cry anymore,i can't cry anymore i can't cry anymore the last tear has fallen though my heart is heavy and the pain keeps calling i can't cry anymore,over you [repeat chorus]
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That's about as sad as it gets, Mike.
Nice sax! (good tracks)
fj
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Hi Mike,
Nice job.
Liked it all but really enjoyed this line[color:#000000][color:#000000].....[/color]Though my heart is heavy and the pain keeps calling Calvin Good Girls And [color:#33CC00][color:#FF6600]B[/color]ad Boys..... [/color][/color] http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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You have certainly learned your way around that music generation software (is it BIAB? If so have you visited the BIAB forum). This sounds sort of like a Mackie type tune. Good job all around. Nice choice of lead instruments.
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thanks for checkin' this out Calvin.Mike
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thanks Kevin,yes it's biab.I haven't visited their site yet,i know i should because i'm really needing to spruce up my music.Mike
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Hey Mike,
Such nice concise simple sad lyrics. Young folks would love this drama. Very Sweet write!
steady-eddie.
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Hi Mike... or should I call you, "Mr. Blues?"
I enjoyed this sad and under-stated blues number. The Sax and Piano break and ending gave it a nice touch. Yeah, you got it goin' on, my friend. Thanks for sharing. ----Dave
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"both my eyes
have turned to rust"
The more I thought about that line the stronger it got.
Your vocal fit perfectly with the lyric and the backing tracks
nailed it.
Enjoyed it!
J&B
Check out our new album Janice Merritt "Am I Blue Enough?"
on Spotify, Apple Music, Pandora, Amazon and others.
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Mike you always surprise me a little when I punch up your songs, and its always a treat to listen to your work..and always a little unique to me. Lane
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction,
one might save you from the other...Vincent
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hey there Eddie,thanx and i'm glad you took a listen.Mike
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hi Dave,Mr.Blues is fine,lol but sometimes it's a happy blues.Thanx for the kind words.Mike
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i appreciate y'alls visit Janice & Bud.Your words mean a lot.Mike
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Hi Mike, Concise lyric and a nice musical blend of jazz and folk, reminding me of Tim Buckley circa 67-68. No clunky chords in this one either, and a really effective minor key modulation. With so much space in between vocals, I was curious how a tasty delay/echo effect at the tail of some of the vocal phrases might sound. Very cool song.  Mike
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
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from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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thank ya Lane,glad to have you stop by.Mike
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thanks Michael,i almost did some echo but then i went for some backing vocal but didn't care for it so i turned down that channel.I think the delay would work but i don't have that effect on my recorder.Mike
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