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I'm glad I saved this song from the trash bin - I like it better over time. Hope you enjoy it. I know the vocals especially in the verses are low in volume - really i did every thing I could to pump them up - but could not find the original vocal tracks. Really you should have heard what I started with. Hope this new mix pulls the vocal out better!! https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/player.cfm?type=single&songid=13637012&q=hi The World I Dreamed Of Storm clouds have gathered they are blocking out the sun Our time is ending when it should have just begun The mellow night is stagnant without a song Have I been sleeping with this coming all along chorus It's not the world I dreamed of, for you and me It's not the way I wanted things to be oh,oh,oh,oh,oh Making denials as we try to wash our hands Our tears are hidden by the shifting of the sands Who will point their fingers, who will take the blame Does it really matter when the story stays the same repeat chorus break We have some chips and as we button up our hearts We beg and whimper as we watch the final ship depart Chorus x2 and ending © copyright 2006 Pete Gallatin
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Vocals are lost a bit in the mix. The backbeat is catchy and the lyric reads well.
Douglas
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I put up a new mix to try to pull the vocals out better- Thanks for your comments- Best ....Pete
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