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https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14779224Juan sittin on the fire escape listenin to a Prince tape through a flea market player he bought for 5 bucks he's takin in the havoc of rush hour traffic just eatin some popcorn damnin his luck only one things different than the typical day he see's the lovely Rosie comin his way and the future is Rosie there's a reason to smile An angel moved in here shes gonna live here for a while like a drunk in the Bowery who just found a key push open the door the future is Rosie She's headin for the clothesline laundry smellin so fine spreadin nothin but sunshine on the brick of this hood and he thinks "life is worth livin cause the signal shes been givin" tells him somethins lying out there and that somethins lookin good still only one thing's different than the typical day the two of them forgot about yesterday and the future is Rosie there's a reason to smile an angel moved in here shes gonna live here for a while like a drunk in the Bowery who just found a key push open the door the future is Rosie Now, he's makin plans to get his GED with Rosie on his side there's no tellin what could be and the future is Rosie there's a reason to smile an angel moved in here shes gonna live here for a while like a drunk in the Bowery who just found a key push open the door the future is Rosie
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Its a good song , i don't why your insulting Rob , Its just robots singing , all good its just entertainment
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Its a good song , i don't why your insulting Rob , Its just robots singing , all good its just entertainment From a guy who pays people to write his songs , that's very hurtful saying it's robots singing . Your demos are not very good chief, I suggest you work on your music instead of me
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Elvis - I fully agree with you. It's a good song. Boy, you got slammed for saying that! Welcome to the club. I know what that's like. How could you claim that robots sang his song? He's a singer songwriter. He's singing. If he's not, he should have mentioned in his post who is singing, who's playing the instruments, who composed the music, who wrote the lyrics. That's what I do. He didn't say that he used AI. He's a singer songwriter ... I'm pretty sure he wrote and recorded everything himself.
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I've paid hit writers to study the craft , it was college, Harvard College Tuition Rates · Tuition, $56,550, So I got a deal.. I apologize if I offended you F , Sarcasm serves no one
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Fdemetrio:
I'm a little unsure how this was musically put together . . . but that don't mean a thing . . . because this is pretty darn good. Has a terrific seventies sound . . . almost a Neil Diamond/Paul Simon feel to it. There are minor elements that seem slightly (very slightly) off balance, like the vocal synching with the melody--but it'sreally, really subtle, so not much noticeable at all. And actually on a second listen it seemed better. Love the opening.
Darn, this is really a solid tune. Maybe the lead vocal can sit back a bit in the production on the verses . . . but again a really picky comment.
Yeah . . . this is a very cool tune. I like it lot! Well done! Catchy chorus!
Deej
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We have a thread about ai up top which there's 4000 Views you couldn't have missed it.
I'm experimenting with ai, using my structured lyrics to generate music .
Just as you use band in a box to generate music, it's pretty much the same. Other than with biab you have control of your chords, that's about it though . Decide what arrangement you want
If you do enough takes through ai, you basically get same effect as band in a box, but the melody available with ai. And enough takes you can get the mood and even chords you wanna hear
It's band in a box on steroids . But it's limited in that you can't use your musical ideas. bad lyricists not really the thing for them
if your lyrics are weak so will be the song.
There's nothing to mix really, it's a reference
I can keep or sweep whatever it puta out And thanks the rhythm of the wurds created a nice loft
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Thanks, Fdem:
As noted, I haven't been on the board much at all, so my apologies for missing a prominent thread. Not familiar with the program you are using, but as I said, I don't much care how it's put together, AI or otherwise, because the result is compelling. It's a good tune, well executed, subjective nits aside. Kudos to you on the song. It's really good.
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