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Kerouac
by Fdemetrio - 10/23/25 07:17 PM
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Lol...
by Bill Draper - 10/23/25 01:34 PM
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https://www.soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15129062A new AI with a old title some might recall from an early Dylan album? Not copied internally not that it matters I'm sure. There was a rewrite done leaving a couple of typos when reading the lyric. I'll sort that soon.
Last edited by Travis david; 10/21/25 03:56 PM.
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Somber song John.
Your lyrics portrayed a state of mind very well.
Personally, I would have matched them with music that was more brooding, nonetheless, the music worked.
Marty
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Hi Marty thanks for your suggestions and listen. The good thing about AI is it can be an easy fix- sometimes!
Cheers
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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John Prine would not be brooding , it works for me , nicely written John. Wanna have some more fun ? , try this promt .
Prompt for Suno:
Title: Desolation Row
Style: Outlaw country / Americana storytelling
Mood: Gritty, lonely, and cinematic — the sound of dust settling after a storm.
Vocal tone: Weathered and sincere, like someone who's lived every word they’re singing.
Theme: A journey through a forgotten stretch of town called Desolation Row — a place full of ghosts, lost dreams, and quiet reckonings. The singer moves through memories of love, regret, and survival, trying to make peace with what’s left.
Imagery & phrases to inspire lyrics: “rusted neon,” “whiskey rain,” “a jukebox with one song left,” “ghosts of the last rodeo,” “no trains running anymore,” “smoke curling from an old bar window.”
Tempo: Slow to mid-tempo (70–90 BPM).
Instruments: Acoustic guitar, slide or steel guitar, upright bass, brushed drums, and a touch of harmonica.
It feels like a long walk down an empty road.
Overall feel: Desolate but beautiful — a quiet anthem for those who never quite made it out.
Last edited by bennash; 10/22/25 07:35 PM.
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Hi bennash
I wouldn't dare mention the great much lamented John Prine in the same sentence as John Vaughan lol
That's a great piece of help and feedback! Will be copied and pasted.
Thanks for your comments and help
John
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if Suno kicks it out , take this out ..Imagery & phrases to inspire lyrics: “rusted neon,” “whiskey rain,” “a jukebox with one song left,” “ghosts of the last rodeo,” “no trains running anymore,
They don't take artists name , but not sure on song names. actually its not songs its AIs suggestions on promts. No worries throw that in there , See what ya get .
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"Critics are like toothpicks , Disposable ".
"Jealousy is the mother of invention"
"Counting Time Will kill You "
" Dogs know you better than you know yourself "
" If I told you once I told you twice . I didn't like what you said the first time.
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