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Hopefully Rob B can contain himself and write something original.
Just a Fackin Lurker
I know you're there, Sid Seventy six and still a kid I can almost hear you talkin Sayin where'd they all go walking, to
The booze it wears, Sid There ain't a damn thing on Tv Ain't cool enough for Facebook Sex ain't what used to be , so
You come here every day and night Check if something you said, was right Instead you see a freak and a smirker I got news for you my friend,
You're just a fackin Lurker A creepy all night jerker Think you'll find a memory Instead a hack and a twirker Better find youurself before you go much further Do yiu wanna be remembered as a lurker?
If the goal was to repeat “lurker” in as many ways as possible without saying anything new, then mission accomplished. Unfortunately, it doesn’t really go beyond that. The lines feel recycled, the insults aren’t particularly creative, and the whole thing reads more like a rough rant than an actual lyric. The typos are a nice touch too—really adds to the “didn’t bother polishing this” vibe.
If the goal was to repeat “lurker” in as many ways as possible without saying anything new, then mission accomplished. Unfortunately, it doesn’t really go beyond that. The lines feel recycled, the insults aren’t particularly creative, and the whole thing reads more like a rough rant than an actual lyric. The typos are a nice touch too—really adds to the “didn’t bother polishing this” vibe.
Knew he couldnt contain himself.
First of all they aren't insults they are reality, its very creepy to be here reading 15 year old threads.
Secondly you are in the top 5 bad song writers here, and that's a terrible group to be in. And you try to insult somebody wayyyuuy better than your hacky selt
Thirdly in 2 minutes I write something more interesting and different than you ever gave.
Nobody tells you, either they don't know any better or they just prefer yiu to walk around with a kick me sign.
Were you asking for feedback or why did you post your lyric here? If you don't want anybody to respond, don't post in the first place. Yeah, twice in the chorus - but the whole thing is still the same idea over and over. If that’s all you took from the critique, you kinda proved my point. You call this interesting? Yeah, it really looks like it was written in two minutes. That explains all the typos.
Were you asking for feedback or why did you post your lyric here? If you don't want anybody to respond, don't post in the first place. Yeah, twice in the chorus - but the whole thing is still the same idea over and over. If that’s all you took from the critique, you kinda proved my point. You call this interesting? Yeah, it really looks like it was written in two minutes. That explains all the typos.
No, I was posting it there cause that's where lurkers lurk
Rob you cant attempt to criticize anybody writing you are atrociously bad.
I gave feedback on your 2-minute lyric, not you. If you can’t separate the two, that’s on you. I pointed out issues in the writing. You responded with spelling errors and insults—kinda proves my point.
Come together.... Not used as a double extendre like Beatles and a garbage lyric and tune.
Write it anyway...
Oh gèeeeeee, fascinating
You listed just two songs. "Come Together" is not a Beatles copy. "Write It Anyway" is a collab song. How many collab songs have you written? Of course, you won't won't respond.
Come together.... Not used as a double extendre like Beatles and a garbage lyric and tune.
Write it anyway...
Oh gèeeeeee, fascinating
You listed just two songs. "Come Together" is not a Beatles copy. "Write It Anyway" is a collab song. How many collab songs have you written? Of course, you won't won't respond.
Still awful and telling that you cant tell difference
Yeah, that song was really memorable. I composed the music. I recorded all the instruments. I recorded vocals in my studio. And several vocalists asked if they could sing it for me. What issues do you have with that one?
I gave feedback on your 2-minute lyric, not you. If you can’t separate the two, that’s on you. I pointed out issues in the writing. You responded with spelling errors and insults—kinda proves my point.
Still awful and telling that you cant tell difference
How many collab songs have you written?
I dimt collab because nobody is any good, like yourself, im asked all the time, back when this place was hot I was asked all the time, mainly cause they wanted me singing.
I dimt collab because nobody is any good, like yourself, im asked all the time, back when this place was hot I was asked all the time, mainly cause they wanted me singing.
But that's why this thread was started
Got it. People asked you all the time if you collaborate with them but you said no because you were too good. Wow. Can I hear something you sang on your own?
Guy doesn't even respond to you, think he's had it too
You think you know everything, don't you. Did you ever ask Guy if we've communicated? Ask him. Guy is from Toronto. Years ago we exchanged our first emails. He's a nice guy.
This conversation is getting boring. Do you have a recording with your vocals?
Dom, here's another example... A video clip of me singing a song I co-wrote. I recorded all the instruments and vocals myself:
I know you're going to say that song is bad but do you have videos of you singing or performing any of your great songs? Dom, come on! Show you are more than just a bag of hot air.
I'm not going away! Tony and I challenged you. Come on Dom, where is a song from you? A song without AI. I want to hear or see you sing! So many people want you to sing for them. Where can I find a demo? Here's another one from me. I composed the music and recorded all the instruments. This is another collab: Come on. If you are such a great songwriter you must have at least one demo you can share with us.
I'm not going away! Tony and I challenged you. Come on Dom, where is a song from you? A song without AI. I want to hear or see you sing! So many people want you to sing for them. Where can I find a demo? Here's another one from me. I composed the music and recorded all the instruments. This is another collab: Come on. If you are such a great songwriter you must have at least one demo you can share with us.
You didn't understand what I just said.
Who am I performing to? You simply want to appeal to somebody hete who will take tiur side.
Come on Dom, show us what you are capable of doing! This is getting boring. You wrote above "Will see what I do with it". You must have completed one song and recorded it. Or are you pure AI-oriented?
Here's another one from me. As you can see all instruments and vocals from me, myself and I. You claim I put everything in Suno. Dom, this is not Suno:
Come on Dom, show us what you are capable of doing! This is getting boring. You wrote above "Will see what I do with it". You must have completed one song and recorded it. Or are you pure AI-oriented?
Here's another one from me. As you can see all instruments and vocals from me, myself and I. You claim I put everything in Suno. Dom, this is not Suno:
Right, this is not a contest, this is not an appeal to people who sympathize with yiu.
Anybody good already knows. Now ask, do you know...
This is me with Andrew Gold: In his Studio in Studio City near Hollywood. Have you ever heard of Andrew. He wrote songs like: Lonely Boy Thank You For Being A Friend Never Let Her Slip Away and many, many more. Did you ever collaborate with anybody we might know? Bruce?
Right, this is not a contest, this is not an appeal to people who sympathize with yiu.
Man, I wish you could write correct English. No, this is not a contest. It's a challenge! Tony and I posted non-AI material. Tony is one of the best songwriters on this site. I know you claim you are too. Show us you are. Dom, what can you really do? Are you just a lyricist. Hey, if that is the case, that's ok. If you're good at writing lyrics ... great. You've been claiming you can do much more. I'd love to hear something.... anything.
This is me with Andrew Gold: In his Studio in Studio City near Hollywood. Have you ever heard of Andrew. He wrote songs like: Lonely Boy Thank You For Being A Friend Never Let Her Slip Away and many, many more. Did you ever collaborate with anybody we might know? Bruce?
Lol, not even Bob Dylan has collabed with Bruce..he has done it bit not often
I don't like collabing. I did it many years ago, but its always somebody like yiu, weak lyrics, weak melodies.
I have collabed with Mark Kaufmann here, Mark was a really good artist that used to frequent here.
But I dint see that as a measuring stick, it really just means you dont feel confident in some part of the process.
I know I do lyric and melody, well, I do singer songwriter pretty well im not a really good guitar player any more. But im good enough to accompany myself.
Im a bad piano player, a decent bass player, decent drummer, great air drummer.neber a good engineer
I do collabs best when a track is presented and I write over it, I think i did simethijg like that with Mike Caro here, which he really liked.
Bottom line is I know where I stand. If something ends up not being good, it usually disappears. I guarantee I have more partial sings, scrapped sings and never really started songs, than anyone here combined.
And the only time I have compared myself to anyone is 9n these fackin forums, because it becomes something beyond the music.
Im not better than millions of other musician's, writers, singers.
So its certainly not a competition.
But craft is something knowable and judgeable. What we like or domt is something different.
Great Dom. You've done a lot of collabs. Share something with us. I'd love to hear something. You do collabs best when a track is presented and you rude over it. What is that?
Are you saying you don't have one single track that you can share with us?
Here's a song I wrote 100% on my own when I was a teenager. I played all the instruments myself and recorded lead and backing vocals: https://soundclick.com/song/7046088 You don't have anything you can share with us? You claim you are such a great songwriter and you have only AI songs you can share? Dom, are you pulling my leg?
Great Dom. You've done a lot of collabs. Share something with us. I'd love to hear something. You do collabs best when a track is presented and you rude over it. What is that?
Is English your first language? Did you read what I wrote or do you B paraphrase me just to continue this spotlight for rob show?
Did I say i did alot of collabs?
I seriously question your intelligence
Your song where you sing is horrendous. Bad lyrics bad melody pitchy dorky singing, samples from toontrack, you swinging your giant head around like your tom Jones LMAO
Im sorry, I didn't wanna go there, but you just know no other way.
Yeah, I speak English and a couple of other languages. What languages do you speak? Yeah, you did say a lot of collabs. I know you don't like my songs. Tony and I challenged you. Let us hear something! I'm sorry Dom, but if you don't have a single song you can share with us ... that kind of underlines my opinion of you. I think I'm with Tony. I'm done... and I think you are too.
Yeah, I speak English and a couple of other languages. What languages do you speak? Yeah, you did say a lot of collabs. I know you don't like my songs. Tony and I challenged you. Let us hear something! I'm sorry Dom, but if you don't have a single song you can share with us ... that kind of underlines my opinion of you. I think I'm with Tony. I'm done... and I think you are too.
Show me where I said i did alot of collabs.
You dont get to create your own story nobody else sees.
I said i don't like doing them. Not sure how u twisted.
Ok, I get it. You've got the greatest songs I've ever heard. But you're not willing to share any songs you previosly wrote. I'd love to comment your songs. But, you don't have any... You're a total waste of time.
As the activity on this site dwindles, this thread is what a troll looks like when he is being starved for arguments and acrimony.
With his usual easy-accessible, go-to sources for engaging discord and acrimony drying up, Dom desperately attempts to create new sources of troll food by calling out people's names who want nothing to do with him...hoping to get an argument going...to feed his sad little being.
Dom is a pathetic little creature to watch, but it is good to see his efforts drying up.
And I see that his kindred-spirit JAPOV dropped in hoping to feed on what Dom's stirs up.
Enjoy it while it lasts Dom and Tony. You have turned JPF.com into the two-pathetic-trolls.com and you are choking it out.
Ps...I thought you quit this place again Dom.
Oh, you can't quit, but the site is quitting you.
No Problem...if you and Tony drive this site to extinction, you can just move over to MUSE. Oh, but you can't, because you are banned from there.
Dom has been saying he's going to a studio for 10 years now . So when does this miracle occur ? Then there's always Hitler Tony . I guess the sites good for a few laughs . Well gotta practice and waste more money . on Ghost studios and crack jokes about fucking robots that everyone gets offended on like the things alive
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.
As the activity on this site dwindles, this thread is what a troll looks like when he is being starved for arguments and acrimony.
With his usual easy-accessible, go-to sources for engaging discord and acrimony drying up, Dom desperately attempts to create new sources of troll food by calling out people's names who want nothing to do with him...hoping to get an argument going...to feed his sad little being.
Dom is a pathetic little creature to watch, but it is good to see his efforts drying up.
And I see that his kindred-spirit JAPOV dropped in hoping to feed on what Dom's stirs up.
Enjoy it while it lasts Dom and Tony. You have turned JPF.com into the two-pathetic-trolls.com and you are choking it out.
Ps...I thought you quit this place again Dom.
Oh, you can't quit, but the site is quitting you.
No Problem...if you and Tony drive this site to extinction, you can just move over to MUSE. Oh, but you can't, because you are banned from there.
They are on to you over there...ACE.
Why don't you shut up you big dummy.
Don't make me come overr to Muse and leave yiu with no ppace to play.
Now we've heard enough lip from you right, big dummy.
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