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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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Revisited this, total 360 on it. https://www.udio.com/songs/6PBHRuYoTfKxzpjhWGVEnF [Verse] Lost in a trance behind the wheel Keep on drivin... Like a priest in the throws of a summer night The boredom bleeds you dry But I drifted past the silence looked up at the city and sighed.... I surrender I surrender to you Cause I'm runnin real low on gas I surrender to you [Verse repeats] Oh, how i love to see you Spanish girls dance Such a go go "Don't you know you could steal me from the grave with just single stroke?" "See this twenty in my hand, Come play with me honey This ain't no joke... I surrender I surrender to you Cause im runnin real low on gas I surrender to you [Bridge] Show me a sign Say anything I just want someone to talk to tonight! Open your arms Don't turn me away I jist cant face myself alone again! I surrender I surrender to you Cause I'm runnin real low on gas I surrender to you
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Revisited this, total 360 on it. https://www.udio.com/songs/6PBHRuYoTfKxzpjhWGVEnF [Verse] Lost in a trance behind the wheel Keep on drivin... Like a priest in the throws of a summer night The boredom bleeds you dry But I drifted past the silence looked up at the city and sighed.... I surrender I surrender to you Cause I'm runnin real low on gas I surrender to you [Verse repeats] Oh, how i love to see you Spanish girls dance Such a go go "Don't you know you could steal me from the grave with just single stroke?" "See this twenty in my hand, Come play with me honey This ain't no joke... I surrender I surrender to you Cause im runnin real low on gas I surrender to you [Bridge] Show me a sign Say anything I just want someone to talk to tonight! Open your arms Don't turn me away I jist cant face myself alone again! I surrender I surrender to you Cause I'm runnin real low on gas I surrender to you Lol... Very romantic, Dom.
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
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If the intent was to be romantic, your ignorant comment might make sense
Its more about somebody like you, so lonely. Bored, nobody to talk to or do anything with.
Only difference hes seeking refuge in a city, where nobody know him, and in a stripper who he's pleading with.
You seek refuge on a forum.
You're a sad human being. I hope this song brings some comfort to you
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If the intent was to be romantic, your ignorant comment might make sense
Its more about somebody like you, so lonely. Bored, nobody to talk to or do anything with.
Only difference hes seeking refuge in a city, where nobody know him, and in a stripper who he's pleading with.
You seek refuge on a forum.
You're a sad human being. I hope this song brings some comfort to you You wrote it... lol
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT'S ALREADY BEEN DELETED...
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If the intent was to be romantic, your ignorant comment might make sense
Its more about somebody like you, so lonely. Bored, nobody to talk to or do anything with.
Only difference hes seeking refuge in a city, where nobody know him, and in a stripper who he's pleading with.
You seek refuge on a forum.
You're a sad human being. I hope this song brings some comfort to you You wrote it... lol Yes, creating a character was not hard with people like you around. What's hard is writing it. CRAFT
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Yes, creating a character was not hard with people like you around. What's hard is writing it.
CRAFT Sooooo... You pulled one of your prize possessions out of your old shoe-box, and re-vamped it specifically for "ME"? WOW! I'm truly flattered, Dom. Truly...
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Now this is one I like Dom....both lyric and what UDIO did with it
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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Now this is one I like Dom....both lyric and what UDIO did with it Thank you. But ts not what udio did with it, it what I asked it to do Through the lyric itself, the style, and listening to dozens of takes. The music, Doesn't exist without me. I think I listened to 50 percussion takes which I asked it to add in second verse and took hours to hear that bridge Music is listening..
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Sounds like hard work.....kinda like my approach better but hey.
Do the best take you can on a bunch of songs in one session.
Put it on Youtube for comments and improvements
Improve when you get a better take from another session.
Accept that you do this because you want to, for fun and not money
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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Sounds like hard work.....kinda like my approach better but hey.
Do the best take you can on a bunch of songs in one session.
Put it on Youtube for comments and improvements
Improve when you get a better take from another session.
Accept that you do this because you want to, for fun and not money Its hard work in a different way. The work as an artist or writer has all been done. Thus is a different time and world. But I believe it's betyer to have started without Ai, it can be a crutch, There is no expectation as a reward, other than knowing all the time I've invested, manifested itself. a few youtube comments doesnt do it for me, my personal results do it. But some commercial success is not a bad dresm
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