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by JAPOV - 04/27/26 10:49 AM
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WHEN?
by JAPOV - 04/23/26 11:28 PM
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In the spirit of "collaborative songwriting"...
Would any of you "AI Geeks" like to help put this to music?
Can't afford a house, I'm payin' it
Too cold outside, I'm payin' it
My electric blanket, I'm payin' it
Insurance scam, I'm payin' it
Got no shine on my shoes
No other lane to choose
Blinded by the dream it seems
I'm too poor to lose
I'm takin' it, I'm sayin' it, I'm hatin' it, I'm payin' it
A man's gotta' eat, I'm payin' it
Pumpin' blood in my tank, I'm payin' it
My doctor don't know why, I'm payin' it
No time for love, I'm payin' it
Nobody cares
How you feel
When your pillow
Is a steering wheel
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What would you suggest this should sound like?
Genre, instrumentation etc
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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70s Ted Nugent 
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I'm getting far too predictable... I guess that "lyric rhythm" was pretty obvious lol Is it too late to edit? "Iiiiiis a - a - aah - steering wheel"  Nice, Rob! I'd like to see if I can get POD-Go to duplicate that rhythm guitar tone... Can I get a stem?
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Well, i tried doing the Ted Nugent thing.
You can make one-time changes. Just give me the final final version. If you do more than one change it's really hard to get the exact same music.
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I can do that myself lol  But, if "ya'll" want to make lyric changes... now would be a good time! How about just an Mp3 and guitar stem for me to play with? I'd like to see if I can get POD-Go to duplicate that rhythm guitar tone...
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I can do that. But Suno is currently down....
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Oh Crap! THEY'RE ON TO ME!!!!!
😲
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I sent you a PM. I need an email address to send you the files. I'll send you all the stems so can decide what you want to use or replace.
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Tony, I'd love to hear what you do with the stuff I sent you.
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Cool, Got it! Kinda' weird though... Guitar track is full of volume swells. Like really heavy side-chain compression... It's OK. I'm not going to use the stems. I'm just going to try to duplicate the sound/production. Try to "modernize" my toolbox. Fun, fun, fun
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Yeah, I just listened to them. The individual stems don't sound good at all but if you load them into your DAW and play them together, they sound super cool. I'm glad I was able to help. Please don't claim that I stole your lyrics. I'm not doing anything with the song. Eventually I'll delete it.
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I put this up for "collab" lol... But hey, cut me a check baby!
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Tony, it is 100% your song (lyrics & music). All I did was prompt Suno.
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The majority of this stinks.
THIS is great
Nobody cares
How you feel
When your pillow
Is a steering wheel
Your verses won't work because your structure calls for rhymes of house, outside, blanket and scam, which dont rhyme, it will limit what you can do with it.
That great line should be the basis of the whole song
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Nobody cares
How you feel
When your pillow
Is a steering wheel
Nobody thinks
what's inside
Oh, whar's
He got to hide
It's not my problem ya see
I read your mind
You big me
Might be stealing foo fighters title big me...
But that came out
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Nobody cares
How you feel
When your pillow
Is a steering wheel
Nobody thinks
what's inside
Oh, whar's
He got to hide
It's not my problem ya see
I read your mind
You big me
Might be stealing foo fighters title big me...
But that came out It's a collab thread. Roll with it, Dom. Show us how it's done... Give us that UDIO magic!
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