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I'd like to know what this, done in suno sounds like.

I love the song but two things bothered me, the Rick Springfield vocal, and the excruciatingly long solo.

Yes two lines in second verse are clipped. It just seemed berter going right to chorus there.

If not im going to Suno soon anyway

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Every Dead Person I know
Verse
You caught your boyfriend chasin all the pretty heads online
He said he's lost without you
seems he's doin mighty fine
and now you're talkin crazy,
that you'll never love again
but you know that never happens,
and the heartbreak's gonna end
Pre
Cause you know you
And I know you
Chorus
And, Every dead person I know..
says the same thing
Nobody with a beating pulse...
believes a word you say
Spend your Friday's at the graveyard, sure you'll fit in quite well
Talk to me tommorow when you've shook this dizzy spell
Yeah, Every dead person I know says the same thing
Verse
Your tissue box is empty as the movie credits roll
I notice Bette Davis played the part of your lost soul
And all the people in the theatre turned their heads to look at you
Look, their all laughin..
stand up and say you're through
Pre
Cause you know you
And I know you
Chorus
And, Every dead person I know..
says the same thing
Nobody with a beating pulse...
believes a word you say
Spend your Friday's at the graveyard, sure you'll fit in quite well
Talk to me tommorow when you've shook this dizzy spell
Yeah, Every dead person I know says the same thing

Brudge
Girl, you ain't kiddin no one
and especially not me
sure as mummies dont smoke cigarettes
you wont be roamin this world free
Cause you know you
And I know you

And, Every dead person I know..
says the same thing
Nobody with a beating pulse...
believes a word you say
Spend your Friday's at the graveyard, sure you'll fit in quite well
Talk to me tommorow when you've shook this dizzy spell
Yeah, Every dead person I know says the same thing

Dom,
after what you wrote in the other thread, I’m not interested in getting into discussions with you. If you haven't noticed, not many people hang out here anymore. I doubt Ben or Marty are keen on helping you out.

Therefore, if you want to try this in Suno, you’re probably better off experimenting directly — that’s really the fastest way to understand how it handles structure and vocals.

As for the song itself, the title line “Every dead person I know says the same thing” is quite a strong and provocative hook — but you may want to think carefully about how it comes across to listeners.