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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Fool Of The Year
Copyright ©2005 Shayne Vaughan
You're such a natural beauty
Don't need a bit of Cover Girl
You've added so much color
To my dreary black and white world
And I just love when you whisper
Sweet somethings in my ear
And I know if I let you go
I would be The Fool Of The Year
In '95 we were married
Still I can't stop staring at you
Pinch myself, am I dreaming?
Feel like I've downing 100 proof
Never thought I was lucky
Until you eased all of my fears
And I know if I let you go
I would be The Fool Of The Year
Bridge:
That award would be a dishonor
No chance in love I'll ever receive
The vows I said on the day we wed
Are promises you can believe
Beneath your face of an angel
I can detect a devilish grin
Everytime you kiss me
It's like the first time over again
Your fingers know the buttons
That shift my heart into high gear
And I know if I let you go
I would be The Fool Of The Year
Tag:
Yes I know if I let you go
I would be The Fool Of The Year
[This message has been edited by shayneman (edited 12-15-2005).]
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Nice and simple Shayne....
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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great job...simple and to the point
nick
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If you give them the tools, you give them a chance.
ngb
If you give them the tools, you give them a chance.
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Hi Shayne,
Very Sweet Song. Leaves no doubt of the feelings for his wife.
Only thing that sings easier to me is,
The vows I said on the day we wed
The vows I MADE on the day we wed
I like the Sweet Somethings, instead of the normal Sweet Nothings
One of my favorite lines,
Beneath your face of an angel
I can detect a devilish grin
Hugs, MS Willie
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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by TxBrownEyedBlond:
Hi Shayne,
Very Sweet Song. Leaves no doubt of the feelings for his wife.
Only thing that sings easier to me is,
The vows I said on the day we wed
The vows I MADE on the day we wed
I like the Sweet Somethings, instead of the normal Sweet Nothings
One of my favorite lines,
Beneath your face of an angel
I can detect a devilish grin
Hugs, MS Willie
</font> Thanks MS Willie, You may have missed the inner rhyme "said" and "wed".
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IMO excellent. No nits except now I want to hear it!
Tony
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HiDee ShayneSter!
Nice Song! Couplea Suggestions:
"To my DULL black & white world"
"& I love IT when you whisper"
Refrain Line'd shorten to:
"& I know if I let you go/I'D be.. (Delete-the) Fool of The Year."
Bridge: "No chance in love I could receive" is kinda Yodaspeak..IMO...
"A Love Award I'll never receive" WOULD do da Job fairly Nicely..IMO again. (K-O-S Alla these Suggestions, of course!)
Tag: & I know if I let you go/
I'd be THE BIGGEST..Fool of The Year~!
Good Angle..overall "KUDOS"..says what Gals LIKE T'Hear... ;-)>
Good Luck wit It, Amigo~
Big Christmas-y Guy-Hug,
Stan
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