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http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7806207Something that reminds me of skipping stones as a kid. While most `normal' people would pick the smoothest, flattest stones...I always managed to grab the round ones. They're much more difficult to skip, but with some work...they do skip. I've asked a friend to write lyrics based on this wacky idea, so until she comes up with something...this will remain an instrumental. Thanks to all who listen,
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Hi Steve, Very sweet. It has a childhood/nostalgic feel to it. It would be interesting to hear lyrics for it but can stand on its own as is. Very well done. By the way, I know it's all in the wrist but I can't skip stones to save my soul!  Ricki
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Thanks Ricki. Childhood/nostalgic, is exactly what I was aiming for with this one. It's more than just the wrist...it's also closing one eye, pointing your toe and sticking your tongue out of the corner of your mouth. 
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Hi Steve, I knew there must be a trick to it. I was afraid it had to do with the Y chromosome! Ricki
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Lol, Steve, couldn't help but laugh at your "how to" description.
Absolutely love this Steve. It is true, it is the sound of childhood, carefree days and gentle ripples on the water.
Very nice to listen to,
Letha
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Hi Steve,
I'll have to see if the pix came out, but we were trying to teach our kids to skip stones just today!! We're on vacation in Maine, and well, it's a bit trickier in the ocean, but that's half the fun!! My son though, was fairly insistent on keeping the ones he thought would skip best....and never tried them out. Perhaps he's thinking ahead to tomorrow, when his sis could be rockless, depending on where the tide is....hmmmmm, must BE that Y chromosome after all!
Anyhoo, this music would have been perfect to have playing in the background. Certainly embodies the feelings I had learning how to do this when I was a child...so for reminding me of that, thank you.
Have a good one!
Beth
P.S. It WOULD be interesting to try to "lyricate" this...but again, it does sound so pretty, you almost hate to tamper with it....
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Yeah but you are never going to get a five skipper with a round stone.
And for Beth, having spent most of my life walking the beach, tell your son as the wave recedes and it is really shallow, skip it then.
Steve, this is really pretty.
Tom
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Hi Steve,
Every melodic fragment sounds like a hook, it's very pretty.
It does need something like a strong vocal or lead instrument to give it more distinction, this is a nice start.
Mike
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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Steve,
This is just well done, and sounds great!
I think a little Pat Metheny'ish single string runs on a classical guitar might add a little interest, if this were to remain an instrumental, or you could go with two versions :-)
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Lol, Steve, couldn't help but laugh at your "how to" description.
Absolutely love this Steve. It is true, it is the sound of childhood, carefree days and gentle ripples on the water.
Very nice to listen to,
Letha LOL! Thanks Letha. I'm happy to have shared it with you.
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Hi Steve,
I'll have to see if the pix came out, but we were trying to teach our kids to skip stones just today!! We're on vacation in Maine, and well, it's a bit trickier in the ocean, but that's half the fun!! My son though, was fairly insistent on keeping the ones he thought would skip best....and never tried them out. Perhaps he's thinking ahead to tomorrow, when his sis could be rockless, depending on where the tide is....hmmmmm, must BE that Y chromosome after all!
Anyhoo, this music would have been perfect to have playing in the background. Certainly embodies the feelings I had learning how to do this when I was a child...so for reminding me of that, thank you.
Have a good one!
Beth
P.S. It WOULD be interesting to try to "lyricate" this...but again, it does sound so pretty, you almost hate to tamper with it.... Hi Beth, I'm so glad that this conjured up wonderful memories for you. My hope is that it can have a similar effect on every listener. I love creating music...even if I have no idea what I'm doing most of the time. I'm quite convinced that I break a lot of the rules, but if it sounds good...it is good (typical attitude from an untrained artist I suppose):) Thanks for listening,
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Yeah but you are never going to get a five skipper with a round stone.
And for Beth, having spent most of my life walking the beach, tell your son as the wave recedes and it is really shallow, skip it then.
Steve, this is really pretty.
Tom True...I have yet to even get a three skipper! Thanks for your kind words Tom.
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Steve,
really, really nice! I grew up near the confluence of the Missouri and Mississippi Rivers...right on the Missouri and a ten minute drive from the Mississippi. I've skipped a bunch of stones in my earlier days...then a bunch of school...then, oh well, never mind. I could hear the soft wafting of the waves near the shoreline.
A trade-off to another lead instrument somewhere in the middle would take it the to the next level, I think. An acoustic guitar or a soft wind instrument would be great! Regardless, this is very beuatiful and nicely done.
Alan
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Hi Steve, Nice to meet you. This is very.. relaxing pretty beautiful NICE ! I totally enjoyed the way it felt as is, although I sure would like to hear what your friend has in mind lytically. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Yes Steve, very youthful and skipping stones is dear to my heart. Something my dad taught me which is special. Good subject.
Patti Smith-Lyric writer Wanted CO-WRITERS
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This conjured up memories for me too, very sweet and delightful. You have displayed a nice touch on the ivories and I would like to see a more progressive feel in the future.
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Hi Steve,
Every melodic fragment sounds like a hook, it's very pretty.
It does need something like a strong vocal or lead instrument to give it more distinction, this is a nice start.
Mike Hi Mike, Thanks for for listening and your keen observations. I'm resisting adding another instrument, until I see if my friend can come up with anything lyrically. If she can't I'll have no choice but to dive into this and carve away some room for another voice (too much going on already). Thanks again,
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And for Beth, having spent most of my life walking the beach, tell your son as the wave recedes and it is really shallow, skip it then.
Sorry to interrupt, Steve!!  Just wanted to tell ya Tom, you should see my two rascals with the stone skipping!  I've "summered" up here since I was born, so know all the tricks too, and they have made so much progress. I'm not sure it'll help get them into any higher institutes of learning...but more importantly, they are carrying on an importarnt tradition and having fun!! Okay, carry on!! Still love this one.... Beth
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Steve,
This is just well done, and sounds great!
I think a little Pat Metheny'ish single string runs on a classical guitar might add a little interest, if this were to remain an instrumental, or you could go with two versions :-) Yikes! Well, I do have a nylon acoustic. Now...where did I put my bag of Pat Metheny chops?!?! I guess I'd need to change the piano for the second A section, since there doesn't seem to be any room for the guitar track. I'll kick it around! Thanks for the idea Magne,
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Hi Steve
I really like the mood and feel of this -- does bring up water in my mind easily and has a nice flow. Would be real cool to hear words added.
jm
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Nice work Steve! It has such a peaceful feel to it. It would be perfect for film themes, but it would also work in therapy to help patients relax. I’ve seen TAXI listings for therapy music. Your track was a great way to start my day off. Best, John
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Nice instrumental, seems well composed and performed. Looking forward to the lyrical version. The "bridge" part around the 2 minute mark was a nice diversion (oh I guess this becomes the ending).
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Steve,
really, really nice! I grew up near the confluence of the Missouri and Mississippi Rivers...right on the Missouri and a ten minute drive from the Mississippi. I've skipped a bunch of stones in my earlier days...then a bunch of school...then, oh well, never mind. I could hear the soft wafting of the waves near the shoreline.
A trade-off to another lead instrument somewhere in the middle would take it the to the next level, I think. An acoustic guitar or a soft wind instrument would be great! Regardless, this is very beuatiful and nicely done.
Alan Thanks Al. The consensus seems to be that this need something more. The problem is...there doesn't seem to be much room for another melody line (ala nylon guitar part). Great to hear that your wife is back home!!!!
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Hi Steve, Nice to meet you. This is very.. relaxing pretty beautiful NICE ! I totally enjoyed the way it felt as is, although I sure would like to hear what your friend has in mind lytically. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart Hi Calvin, Thank you. It's nice to meet you too. I haven't heard a thing from my friend...I guess she's stumped with this one.
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It's more than just the wrist...it's also closing one eye, pointing your toe and sticking your tongue out of the corner of your mouth. True! But don't forget to dip your right knee too (if you're right handed, that is). This is really pretty, Steve and I can see why you chose that title. I can also see why your friend hasn't gotten back to you yet - that would be a tough lyric to write, imo. No matter though - I think it works great as is. I didn't feel anything was missing but I don't do instrumentals. In any case, I have to believe this would find a happy home somewhere..... Scott
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Sorry for not monitoring my own thread!
Thanks to:
Patti
Mark
Beth (again)
Joice
John
Kevin
and...Scott
As always, I appreciate the time that you all have taken to listen and post such wonderful, supportive comments.
Thank you!
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Thank you Nadia. Coming from someone with your piano skills, I am very humbled. I'm a guitarist (primarily) that has always enjoyed `dabbling' with other instruments.
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Hi Steve,
It's nice to "meet" you.
This is just lovely. It has such a relaxing, tranquil feel to it. Perfect title too! You did a great job with this....thanks for sharing it.
Kind wishes,
Gail
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Hi Gail,
Nice meeting you too. Thanks for listening!
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You are very welcome, Steve. Please don't forget to let us know when your composition sounds in movie.
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