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Nelson,
Thank you so much my friend. Yes, when Ian sends these tracks, I usually cry for a few days before I can even record, they are so beautiful to me, maybe it helps me sound better...but I am so happy you listened and liked it!!
Tammy
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Nelson,
Thank you very much. This means a great deal coming from such a talented person as yourself.
Thanks again,
Danny
Last edited by Dannyk1; 10/13/11 11:56 PM.
The heart has its reasons, of which reason knows nothing of." —Blaise Pascal, 1670
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Hey Tans,
Well, what a great collab !
Thar's some impressive playing by Mr Ferrin, and a well delivered vocal.
Nits or crits ? Not much really. Perhaps a little more seperation of the versus and chorus. Maybe a bit more ( vocal )notation, as the first 2 lines drag a little. I'm not so sure about sliding the finishing note ( "in and within" ) of the phrases.
It's all there for sure. and cretainly ready for musical arrangement. ( I'd pick out the best piano parts, and then simplify a bit )
Good luck !
cheers, niteshift
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Hi Tams,
I haven't been around in a while and I see this song has really gotten some well deserved attention. I'm impressed all to hell! You sound the best I've heard you yet and you were always sounding good (no more bathroom recordings!) You conveyed the emotion and sentiment of the lyrics so well and Ian's playing really is inspired. Nicely done to all of you.
Ricki
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Hi Ricki,
I know your post was directed to Tammy but I want to thank you for your compliments.
Danny
The heart has its reasons, of which reason knows nothing of." —Blaise Pascal, 1670
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Geoff,
So happy you liked this one...FINALLY!! See, just be patient with me!!
I do understand your ideas on this, I have had similar comments, but thanks for giving it your time, I really do appreciate your comments.
Tammy
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Ricki,
Girl, you had me on Cloud 9 all day...I really appreciate you stopping in, I always look forward to your input.
Thanks so much and I am working hard and it is so cool you noticed!!!
Tammy
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Tammy...great job on this one....vocal is outstanding....Bob
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Bob,
Always love your take on my songs and so happy you got to hear it before it slipped too far away!! Thanks!!
Tammy
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Stellar lyrics and vocals, and the song is superb. It deserves a BUMP....so be it...lol~~MFB III
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Thanks M.!!
I am so happy you liked this one to allow it to be remembered, this did very well on the internet radio. So glad to see it again!
Tammy
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Thanks M,
All kindnesses are appreciated and welcomed.
Danny
The heart has its reasons, of which reason knows nothing of." —Blaise Pascal, 1670
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