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Hey Martin,
Beautiful song. I especially like the verse melody. At first I thought the chorus needed more "lift" but then after hearing it the 2nd time, it really has kind of an opposite yet reflective feel rather than a hook lift, which works here. I would like to see if you further production however to give the chorus a little more identity either with music arrangement or harmony to give it slightly more distinction from the verse transition.
This is a beautiful write, and very heartfelt for sure--nice work!
steady-eddie.
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