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Hi Deej,
Very cool song -- it sounds great!
It looks like you're getting some nice suggestions too!
The one picky lyric change I'd suggest is that, in the second PC, you might want to say:
And all the times I thought they ALL were right—
The way you have it, it sounds like you're saying they're "alright" -- like, "those people are alright" -- instead of that all of them are right!
Lisa
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