hey Nigel,

Yep, that's a fun song.

Crit ? I'd grunge up the pulse guitar more ( real dirty ) and put a mandolin in there as well ? Well, there's contrast for you. smile Drums need to be more upbeat, phrased, and thrashy. Where's the do-woop girls ? That would fit well too. ( I put my hand up for auditioning them for the "rolling in the hay" part, when you do the video. smile

Catchy ! It's worth putting some work into this one.

cheers, niteshift