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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
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by Fdemetrio - 04/25/24 01:36 AM
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My first after COVID
I need your Loving
© 2023 Mackie Humphries
V1
It all started
Just past midnight
You slammed the door
And drove away
CH
Now I’m missin’ you
Let me take back
My angry words
I’ll do anything
To heal the hurt
I am nothing without you
V2
I wasn’t thinking
Wanting you gone
I’m still your fool
Cryin’ here alone
CH
Now I’m missin’ you
Let me take back
My angry words
I’ll do anything
To heal the hurt
I am nothing without you
Girl I’m here hoping
I need your loving
I need your loving
CH
Now I’m missin’ you
Let me take back
My angry words
I’ll do anything
To heal the hurt
I am nothing without you
Girl I’m here hoping
I need your loving
I need your loving……….
Mackie
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Hello, Mackie. I hope the covid was not a bad case like others I have heard from. I like the simplicity of this lyric but stumbled when trying to read/sing it out loud, as I sometimes do. Also, I think another verse before the chorus to explain what is going on between the singer and his lover. As always, keep or sweep. Thank you for sharing. 
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Douglas
Thanks for checking this one. I tend to keep things simple and hope to improve with feedback--It does need a little explaining: the angry words and the singer's hurt.
Age has a way of slowing one down-even with all the shots: like the flu, one can get it, maybe not as severe.
Mackie-
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Glad to hear you beat it. Touch wood I have been lucky and have avoided it up to now but who knows about the future? I have all my shots and still take precautions when out.
Would you mind if I have a go at what you have started here?
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Go ahead and work with what I started!~
Maxkie
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Tag you are it. See if you can build on this, Mackie. I need your Loving © 2023 Mackie Humphries [V] It all started WAY past midnight WITH THE SLAMMING OF the door. WITH THE SOUND OF SCREECHING TIRES, THE START OF OUR TUG OF WAR [V] I wasn’t thinking, WASN"T LISTENING TO ANYTHING YOU SAID. AND WITH THE SETTLING OF THE GRAVEL I STAND CRYIN' HERE INSTEAD. [C] Now I ONLY NEED TO PULL YOU BACK. PULL YOU BACK TO ME. ERASE IN ANGER WHAT I SAID, PRAY THAT YOU MIGHT SEE. THAT I WILL TRY, AND I WILL DIE, IF I DON'T HAVE YOU NEAR. FOR US TO WIN IN THIS TUG OF WAR I NEED TO PULL YOU HERE. BREAK: Girl I’m here hoping I need your loving I need your loving CH Now I’m missin’ you Let me take back My angry words I’ll do anything To heal the hurt I am nothing without you Girl I’m here hoping I need your loving I need your loving……….
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Douglas It reads much better--Put some music to it if you like! Mackie[quote=Douglas Murphy]Tag you are it. See if you can build on this, Mackie. I need your Love © 2023 Mackie Humphries abd Douglas Murphy [V] It all started JUST past midnight WITH THE SLAMMING OF the door. RACIN' ENGINE AND SCREECHING TIRES, YOU'RE LEAVIN' ME ONCE MORE [V] I wasn’t thinking, WASN"T LISTENING TO ANYTHING THAT YOU SAID TAIL LIGHTS FADE IN THE NIGHT I'M LEFT IN THIS LONELY BED [C] LET ME MAKE RIGHT MY HURTIN' MISTAKES I BEG FOR ONE MORE CHANCE TO LOVE YOU AGAIN. YOU ARE STILL ALL MINE MY ANGEL IN THE NIGHT NO MORE HARSH WORDS LOVE CAN MAKE IT RIGHT BREAK:
GIRL JUST ONE MORE CHANCE
I still need your love
.. YOUR SWEET LOVE
[C]
LET ME MAKE RIGHT
MY HURTIN' MISTAKES
I BEG FOR ONE MORE CHANCE
TO LOVE YOU AGAIN.
GIRL JUST ONE MORE CHANCE
I still need your love
.. YOUR SWEET LOVE
Last edited by Mackie H.; 01/23/23 11:35 AM. Reason: working
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