Falling Feather

Sad as a shadow with no one to cling to
Lonely as a drop of rain in a sky of blue
There in the sunshine unable to bloom
Her heart's been melted inside the spoon

A gate left open as she wandered on in
Knowing well the worse was about to begin
A world of sorrow disguised by the feeling
Soon bartered her soul for one more dealing

And the end,it lasts forever
When it begins,she'll never know
Lost in time,like a falling feather
All in her mind,wherever the wind blows

Shame in the presence of the Devil's demand
Morals are lost to his evil command
To feed the hunger she does what it takes
To get back to herself would be the great escape

And the end,it lasts forever
When it begins,she'll never know
Lost in time,like a falling feather
All in her mind,wherever the wind blows

Hi Mike,


Cool and pretty heavy sounding.....


Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

I like it Mike.
Shows promise.

Vic

I like it but the bit about inside the spoon struck me as odd. I don't know what that means. Otherwise, very good.

This piece I interpret as the saga of a fallen woman who has taken to drugs and prostitution. Correct?

Thanx for checkin' it out Calvin.Mike

Hey Vic,i appreciate the visit.I'd like to see it grow into something more.Mike

Hey there Colin,thanx for the look at.That line is in reference to drug use as it seems everyday people are falling into this hole.Probably more than ever or maybe we just hear more about with all the media nowadays.Mike

Hiya Brian,yes,it is about drug use but not prostitution though a lot of it finds its way in to prostitution to feed the habit.Mike

Hi Michael,

Tragic drama you have unfolding here! Very cool!
At first I thought she was abused and then I thought prostitute, but by the end, I thought drugs!

Lisa

hey Lisa,i appreciate your time and thoughts on this one. Mike