Chasing Seagulls - v. rough worktape - 08/23/09 07:44 PM
This was recently on the lyric board. I recorded it as a draft for comments - off pitch and all warts showing! Questions are whether the treatment suits the lyrics? I am undecided whether to finish it out as an acoustic song or electrify as more of a rocker. Or should it be changed into a country song or what? All comments are solicited.
[color:#990000][size:14pt]Chasing Seagulls[/size][/color]
Chasing Seagulls Copyright © 2009 Colin Ward
V1
Chasing seagulls,
Dolphins jumping,
I've got sand, between my toes,
Small bikinis,
Sun is shining,
What I'm thinking, no-one knows
V2
Chasing seagulls,
Girls are laughing,
Palm trees leaning in the breeze,
Sailing green hulls,
Waves are crashing,
But it's not enough to please me
Chorus
'Cause I'm not happy here in Paradise,
When you're a thousand miles away,
Take a chance and come on down,
Let's go chasing seagulls today
V3
Chasing seagulls,
Skimming stones,
People near me catching rays,
Jethro Tull songs,
Empty rib bones,
My mind keeps drifting, up your way
Chorus
Bridge
It's hard to leave your comfort zone,
Hard to leave family behind,
But life is good in Paradise,
Stick your toe in the Gulf and you'll be fine
Instrumental verse
Chorus
I'm not happy here in Paradise,
When you're a thousand miles away,
Take a chance and come on down,
Let's go chasing seagulls today
[color:#990000][size:14pt]Chasing Seagulls[/
Chasing Seagulls Copyright © 2009 Colin Ward
V1
Chasing seagulls,
Dolphins jumping,
I've got sand, between my toes,
Small bikinis,
Sun is shining,
What I'm thinking, no-one knows
V2
Chasing seagulls,
Girls are laughing,
Palm trees leaning in the breeze,
Sailing green hulls,
Waves are crashing,
But it's not enough to please me
Chorus
'Cause I'm not happy here in Paradise,
When you're a thousand miles away,
Take a chance and come on down,
Let's go chasing seagulls today
V3
Chasing seagulls,
Skimming stones,
People near me catching rays,
Jethro Tull songs,
Empty rib bones,
My mind keeps drifting, up your way
Chorus
Bridge
It's hard to leave your comfort zone,
Hard to leave family behind,
But life is good in Paradise,
Stick your toe in the Gulf and you'll be fine
Instrumental verse
Chorus
I'm not happy here in Paradise,
When you're a thousand miles away,
Take a chance and come on down,
Let's go chasing seagulls today