Originally Posted by Dave Gill
Here's a little something I threw together but never delivered. I picture the intro with a nice melodic piano and then the beat comes in (similar to Eminem's "Lose Yourself") to start the rap.

<intro>
Through all of our years
and those still to come
Forever, I'll love you
I swear.
I promise I'll never stop
showing you that
I still care.

<begin beat>

<rap>
And I know
yes, I know
what you heart
truly needs
And I'll do
all I can
Give it all
to you, free
And I hope
that you don't
underes-
timate me
or these words
that I write
while I let
my heart bleed
on these pages
I use
to express
all my love
Cause I love you
so much
High as hea-
ven above
and as deep
as the ocean
This notion of Va-
lentine's day
is a potion
or poison
I take
just to feel you
inside me
Surprise you
with gifts
and the sex
that we have
after throwing
a fit
cause we work
out our issues
and bit by a bit
I might bite you
but you'd
bite me back
then you'd spit me
right out
make me clean up
the mess
and I do
cause I love you
I love you
much more
never less


I need to clean OUT
the ear canal to my soul
So I can hear what you mean
not just what you have said
I need to clean UP
the funky breath of my heart
so I can say that I love you
without killing you dead
It's such a crazy life
But we're both
so insane
that it's nor-
mal for us
to be li-
ving this way
I really love you, babe
I mean forever I do
And here's a little gift from me
That I made special for you

Happy V-Day
Happy Valentine's Day
Happy V-Day
Happy Valentine's Day
Happy V-Day
Happy Valentine's Day

And I love you more
than any other word
I can say


Peace,

Dave



That's a cool song and I could definitely Rap along with it in my head

jm

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