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Hi Lex -- This is a really pretty piece. I get the feeling that she's aching because the boy is in love with another girl, but I'm with Michael that it should be clarified a little more. It would still be cool to keep it subtle, but just a little somethin' somethin'! Also, in verse one, I thought maybe: "This old car is breaking LIKE bones." -- Lisa
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