Heya Lex,

I'm really diggin' the vibe you have going on here, and looks like you've made some changes for the sake of clarification. So there's one more thing that maybe you should address...and that is this whole "town" thing. I read the lyrics and know you're walking through a Ghost Town...then you reference a girl in town. What town? The town you're in? Back home? Up North? Down south? If you can connect that dot for me I would be happier than a hot hog in a cool puddle of mud. (I think that's a southern expression, right?)

I love the "WHISTLIN' Dixing, Blowin' Smoke" line. GREAT JOB!

Terrill


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~ terrill

“One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.”
― Bob Marley

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