Hi Vondelle.
You're right about that line. I will change it.

The chorus could be spoken or thought by Geronimo, or it could be just a reflection of what the rest of the world is saying about him. A bit like saying "The bogey man will get you if you don't eat your greens".

Thank you for your interest and help.
Vic



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