Vic,

Another great song lesson.

A thought:
1st verse: past
2nd verse: ends in "now"
3rd verse: past
4th verse: now

The two 'nows' are different. First "now", Geronimo is free. The second "now", no.
Maybe reword the 2nd verse to be past tense as well?

smile Dave

Last edited by Dave Whitehead; 08/16/13 10:56 PM.