Hi Floyd.
Fine song here and your usual excellent vocal.
My favourite part "lucky for me, my heart is on it's own
it's too blind to see that the rest of me
is standing here alone".
Arrangement wise, you could try a rhythm tacet on "alone" there so it leaves it waiting for the next part of the chorus.
Vic



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