Real pretty tune Floyd! I like the chord progression and the feel of it. Nice singing too! I could honestly hear Gary Morris singing this one.

The dudes in Nashville are always telling me "Show me.. don't tell me" and you did just and did it well. But IMHO the last verse should do more of this to match the rest of a real good tune. I was playing around with something like..

I heard that screen door slam,
Watched your tail lights fade,
So there's no doubt we're through
but i can't bare to tell my heart
it would surely break in two
without you here to live for (I like "to love" too)
it'd have no reason to go on
lucky for me, my heart doesn't know you're gone

Great tune man! Keep em' comin' :-)
-S


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