Originally Posted by Nelson
An absolute beauty of a song. The Uke is a perfect touch here.
Vocals are so warm and inviting. Another winner Floyd.

Nelson - Thanks so much. (That's actually a mandolin).


Originally Posted by E Swartz
Janice/Floyd,

Nice job here, loved the vocals as usual Janice. Nice performance/production as well. This has a cute chronological story which I like, but not sure the story describes broken hearts or heartache really with the storyline. It works however in a general sense, just thinking that maybe a more sentimental reaction or reflection as to why she wants to take a drive might work better lyrically--not sure, just throwing that thought out.

Very nice guys, I enjoyed this! steady-eddie.

Thanks for the listen and thoughts, eddie. Changing this one would be too hard... smile






Originally Posted by Lisa Gundling
Hi Floyd and Janice,

Another BEAUTY here! I love the metaphor of getting this old car started with getting our lives started. "We'd be happy IF ... this or IF that ... " and getting the old car started as a concrete image/example of this works great!

By the way, it took me a half hour of sleuthing to figure out what was going on with Couch’s and Bugsey’s conversation at the beginning of this thread. I agree with Floyd’s “uncool” comment.

Lisa

Lisa - Thanks for your wonderful thoughts - and your support!!!