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This is really good Beth and Ricki,
The lyric is terribly clever and engaging and the music is pretty perfect for the lyric.
Lyric wise, I'm not in love w/ the line "Gotta get out of bed"... it's the opening and it's not exactly a zinger. It's kind of stating the obvious and I bet you could come up w/ something more interesting in a non-rhyming line.
Music wise no real nits. IMO this is ready for the full band. It's a really good song IMO.
Peace,
Ian
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