This is really good Beth and Ricki,

The lyric is terribly clever and engaging and the music is pretty perfect for the lyric.

Lyric wise, I'm not in love w/ the line "Gotta get out of bed"... it's the opening and it's not exactly a zinger. It's kind of stating the obvious and I bet you could come up w/ something more interesting in a non-rhyming line.

Music wise no real nits. IMO this is ready for the full band. It's a really good song IMO.

Peace,

Ian

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