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Jim as per Daves comment it certainly was completely told.
Just think there is too much detail and explanation as for instance removing a lot of lines from each verse I dont see the lyric being poorer for it.
I got rid of everything That reminded me of you Threw your pictures in the trash Couldn't stand your carefree look
Then you came to me tonight Like there was nothing wrong Pulled me close and kissed me I went home and wrote this song Don't know why I acted like that
What the hell was I thinking of Cos we made up And I'm Back In Love
Then I saw you with BB KING It threw me into a rage turned a hundred shades of green I had the blues all day
Yours to do with as you please of course.
Arty
Its not write or wrong just an opinion
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