Jim as per Daves comment it certainly was completely told.

Just think there is too much detail and explanation as for instance removing a lot of lines from each verse I dont see the lyric being poorer for it.


I got rid of everything
That reminded me of you
Threw your pictures in the trash
Couldn't stand your carefree look


Then you came to me tonight
Like there was nothing wrong
Pulled me close and kissed me
I went home and wrote this song
Don't know why I acted like that

What the hell was I thinking of
Cos we made up
And I'm Back In Love


Then I saw you with BB KING
It threw me into a rage
turned a hundred shades of green
I had the blues all day


Yours to do with as you please of course.


Arty


Its not write or wrong just an opinion