Yup .... I'd say it works. Mighty fine lyric Travis and excellent job bringing them home Vic. Extremely enjoyable listen though when I saw the title, I thought I was going to hear Vic do his best Mick Jagger smile

Seriously ....great job. Only small nit I heard was on the line "oh how fast the time just kinda melted away" .... It seemed like a lot of words to vocally fit into that line .... Just nitpicking though

Dave