Hi,

I've been putting this together over the last few weeks. I'd like to get your impressions on anything that might occur to you....Lyrics, arrangement, vocals, mix...
Sort of a hybrid jazzy feel I'm going for...Please tell me what works for you....I'm trying to finalize a version....

https://www.reverbnation.com/ihor/song/24420499-the-billboard-life

The Billboard Life
©Lyrics/Music 2015 I. wolosenko
Arrangement Iggyiggy and Tony
Vocals :Iggyiggy
Guitars; Tony DiGregorio


Verse 1
The signs in the sky
All high heels and skin
Pictures of prizes
That I'll never win
Oh, they show me
How good my life could be

Verse 2
I try to ignore them
It's so hard to do
Pushing my buttons
When I'm feeling blue
I could try a little harder
If I knew that I could win

Chorus
While the girls with perfect voices
Arrive in their Rolls Royces
Sing blessings from behind the darkened glass
They've run out of loaves and fishes
So they feed us dreams and wishes
We all watch them .......waving...... as they pass

Verse 3
Celebrity faces,
Look down and grin
Selling their secrets
Of how they stay thin
Oh, they show me
How to be a better man

Bridge
Where is justice hiding
Love cannot be found
Rising up together
Alone
We ....all..... fall..... down

Verse 4
Marvelous messages
Sacred and real
Showing the wisdom
Of all you can steal
I keep looking up
I'll give the wheel another spin

Chorus
While the girls with perfect voices
Arrive in their Rolls Royces
Sing blessings from behind the darkened glass
They've run out of loaves and fishes
So they feed us dreams and wishes
We all watch them .......waving...... as they pass