Hey. The second verse is more like fire and gasoline but I felt no sparks in the first verse. I didn't feel the crazy combustible love out of that. Like at any moment say in the chip aisle at a Walmart he will grab you and just start making out with you. Or on the hood of a car at a police station. That is fire and gasoline. Your love for each other needs to BLOW UP. Him showing that he cares isn't fire and gasoline. The kiss line? Not fire and gasoline. They read like lines from some sensual romance book. Or your diary about a lover. Fire and gasoline go BOOM. there ain't no BOOM in the first verses. Give me BOOM.

Last edited by Aaron Authier; 08/02/16 07:02 PM.