Morning, Tom:

A really nice vibe to this one. No nits or suggestions 'cause you know whether or not it needs anything. No doubt in my mind, this one could chart if you get lucky enough to have somebody who has enough "stroke" in the music biz to promote it. Enjoyed your vocal, the lyric and your arrangement.

While I'm at it, Mele Kalikimaka!

All the best, ----Dave