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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: May 2015
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For me the gaps between lyrical phrases are too big.
good contrast between verses and chorus The style is a bit sparse. I may add some touches in the spaces when I do a new mix soon. This is your typical major key in the verse modulating to the relative minor in the chorus; that plus the backing harmonies provides contrast. It stills needs a little something in the choruse, though, just not sure quite what, yet. Hi TC
Welcome back.Pleased to hear your wife is doing well!
Quite a dark write but it works lyrically and musically
Thanks for the listen
Travis Thanks Travis. I appreciate the listen and well wishes.
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