Originally Posted by Deej56
TC,

Like the sound of this one right out of the gate. To me, maybe bringing the vocal out front a bit more would help. It particularly gets lost in the chorus. But that’s a production thing—clearly not my strong suit—so take it for what it’s worth. Enjoyed this one a lot.

All the best,

Deej


Thanks Deej. I will be doing a new mix soon; I was going to do one sooner but I got involved in a new song. I always appreciate critique - it helps me get better.

Originally Posted by Calvin
Hello TC,


Wow, good work, very creative.
This part is really nice......

Death survives because of life


Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart


Thanks, Calvin. I appreciate the listen and glad you liked the lyrics (at least that one line! :-p)

Originally Posted by E Swartz
TC,

I really liked this rock song. It for me is a great example of a song with a lot of drive, yet still has good instrument separation along with a solid melody--great vocals too that are easily understood. I can see the Eagles a bit, but your voice has a Graham Nash tone as well--a cool thing. I loved the mix, but think Mike Z was right about having the lead vox in places sit out a "tad" more. I like the lyrics but especially musically how it flows. Great percussion too!

steady-eddie


Thanks, Eddie. After I did it I could hear the Eagles influence in the first part, and Rush a bit on the second. I will be doing a new mix and I will try to make the vox sound a bit bigger.

Drums were a nightmare at first but now I really have fun doing them.

Originally Posted by lane1777
Like the song TC, I understand the lyric, except for one line in the song, like the way its written and what a great sound. Lane


Thanks, Lane. Glad you liked it. I would be interested to know which line you don't understand.

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Thanks again! I appreciate the listen and comments, as always.

Peace,
TC

If it has strings I will find a way to play it!

You can hear my tunes at https://soundcloud.com/tc-gypsy